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CommentsIt's Amazing!It reminds me the way Romita SR. used to do it,it feels very classic, even the mask's visors. Personally I like to design him rather slender but still muscular, kinda like Mark Bagley did him on his earlier work.The only thing I could say is be carefull with the spider symbol, it's kinda easy to end up looking more like a cockroach than a spider.Later!
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the dilema is this: you have an extremely realistic style that works amazingly well. When dealing with an acrobat like spidey, I think its important to really exaggerate the body position past the limit of what a normal body would do. If you took this one and exaggerated the pose a lot more, i think it would pack some serious punch -- GYARADOS is confused! It hurt itself in it's confusion! GYARADOS fainted! I would say slightly too shiny on the blue parts of the legs, and on the black strip around the eyes: the highlight on the blue leggings looks like he's wearing PVC rather than cloth, and the eye highlight distracts from the shape of his mask and head.
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It also has that ol' classic Spider-Man look that I've come accustomed to after 30+ years drawing him myself countless times. I really like the way his body is twisting and reaching to change directions - without over-the-top contortions and exaggerations.
The only point I would change would be to have webbing starting to explode below his trigger fingers (it looks great without it, nevertheless
I really like the shape of the head, showing a slender jaw and neckline
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The back leg appears to be broken [and in an unnatural position] from the hip, like McFarlane did, he could get away with it being off because his drawing skills are not as strong as yours, and were based on his "own" rules. You have more traditional drawing skills, thus it sticks out to me more than it would on someone whose work is more stylized.
Last, I think the neck area is a bit overdone compared to the rest of the figure. Just my .02, for consideration.
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