Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

:turbopoke:
 
©2009 *mikemayhew
:iconmikemayhew:

Artist's Comments

11X17 on the back of Marvel interior stock in pencil.

Critiques


:icontheartyst:
You are the Master of Simplicity - proving the old adage: less is more - A clean, crisp and beautiful layout, showing your experience and effortless technique. The great expressions on the three characters tells a story about their personalities - the confident athletic Flash, unsure bookworm Peter and contemplating Mary Jane.

I also have to take my hat off to your models and the art direction you have obviously given them. Subtleties such as her thinking and not yet writing, her pen is about to touch down on a brand new page of the diary (even she doesn't know what will be said...)

V渚õя
The Artist thought this was FAIR
39 out of 39 deviants thought this was fair.

Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 1 1 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconpaul-art:
i love it! i'm thrown off a bit by a few things but it's still fantastic. I'm assuming you use models?

--
blahhck
:iconotisinhell:
Peter, Peter! Choose Peter. He´s the best nerd in the world :D
Great work as always. Love your pencils.

--
"I did it my way"
:iconbakart:
whhooaaaa...sweeeeettt!!!

--
:skullbones: Revolution Deathsquad :skullbones:

:pointl: [link] :pointr:
:iconsketchartist76:
damn sweet

--
"I think Artist Chicks are WAY hotter than Supermodels :)"
"There's a devil in my head..an angel in my bed...."
:iconpandoraspride:
Love the way you draw Peter, his face is perfect for Spiderman^^

--
" Being Normal is Vastly Overrated ", Aggie Cromwell
:iconthedying:
Awesome. Don't think you need the wall and ceiling line in the corner. It seems out of perspective compared to the window. You could do away with that corner all together. But I'm just a hack :P so u'll probably be better off with a second opinion. Mary Jane pondering away is very sweet.

--
Gallery of Comic Art [link]
:iconkumitawapa:
hello,

I think this piece is great, just two things, It seems to me that the perspective in the window is diferent from the perspective in the walls and roof.... the other (little) thing, was that is a little to high, so white, is a little hard to see some details, and thats a pitty, because looks georgeous!!! :)

sorry for my poor english, since I'm spanish and I don't write it properly the most part of the time!! n_n"

Details

May 29
475 KB
475 KB
803×1250

Statistics

28
233 [who?]
3,556 (3 today)
128 (3 today)

Share

Link
Embed
Thumb

Site Map